Sunday, February 21, 2010

Comments For Kids Week 6

This week I had a little girl named Eden who wrote a story called Waves and the Lost Mum. It was a story about Waves who was a sea unicorn and she was an orphan. She left her home one day and went on a journey to find her mother. This was a really creative story and I enjoyed reading it. The best part were the voice thread comments on the side that were from the other students commenting on the story. These kids are adorable and they have a lot of great commentary on Eden's story.
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  1. AnonymousFebruary 25, 2010 at 3:05 PM

    Eden's story sounds like it was very entertaining. Unfortunately I was unable to see that one. Your description on what you commented on for Kids was very good and informative.

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  2. PenelopeFebruary 28, 2010 at 10:30 AM

    I might have to read this story. It sounds very interesting.

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